by Emilie
(Wyoming)
*Part One*
It was a warm afternoon for Peaceful.
She nickered in the sun light and bounced around playfully.
She was just born at that time.
Her mother was just over on the other side of the bushes.
Peaceful was happy, she was proud to be a daughter of the of the herd leader.
She whinnied she thought that this would be the PERFECT day for her.
She stopped her play to listen to a strange noise coming from the woods.
She stared straight into the darkness of the woods.
"What's that??" She thought. She looked at her mother once more then turned toward the woods, and took 6 steps toward it.
Part two will be: "Peaceful... The Curious"
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by Emilie
(Cheyenne, Wyoming, U.S.A.)
Peaceful quickly stepped back.
But she was wondering, "What is that?"
She crept towards the woods not even glimpsing at her mother or father.
When she reached the woods she saw the figure tall with white eyes standing on two legs. "A bear? No, to short. Should I go for help? No I can prove I'm brave."
She quickly ran to the side trying to run behind the odd looking figure. She felt something grab her, She was shoved into a monster that had a big mouth on it it was all white. She kicked and stomped hoping the enemy would give up. Nope it wouldn't. Peaceful was trying to call for her mother and father. She at last gave up.
The figure shut the mouth of the monster, she called out again for her parents. Luckily, her parents heard her.
Finally, Peaceful's father came running as lighting. She was saved at last! But, man was she in trouble! Her father came running into the darkness of the woods. The tall figure took out some sort of stick and hit her father. He fell down dead.
She looked at his body and began to cry. She laid her head down. The large monster jolted. She didn't care, all she cared was that her father..was....dead... She decided there was no hope for her. She closed her eyes and thought, "this is all my fault, now father is dead and it's all my fault."
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Part 3: Peaceful....The Slave
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by Emilie
(Wyoming)
Just to let you know yes I'm french so "Wei Mamaman" is "yes mama" and no I don't have a laptop but yes I do have an iPhone. I hope you like the story! I'm TRYING to work on my grammar!
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MEANWHILE...
"Who is it?" Emilie said with anger but sadness flaring in her eyes.
"Em, you need to come out and eat."
Emilie crossed her arms. "OK I'm coming out" Trying not to sound so upset.
"What are you doing Em?"
"I'm on my laptop."
"Shut it down for now, come eat."
"OK I'm coming."
Emilie shut down her laptop. just the other day she found out one of her friends got a pony. She shut down the laptop spun around in her chair, then walked out of the room. Emilie walked up to the tale everyone was there except her. She sat down then scooped some leftover macaroni onto her plate. Emilie sighed.
"Emilie don't have a bad attitude."
"I'm not mom."
"Just checking. Pass the salt please when you're done."
"Here." Emilie said as she shoved the salt down the table to her Mom. Emilie quickly ate the rest of her disgusting meal. Then she was just about to go back to her room when her mom called her back.
"Come here and help clean up."
"Wie Mamaman."
Emilie helped clean up then quickly ran downstairs to her room. She opened her laptop up again then went on "msn". Her friend was online. Great. She counted in her mind. "3,2,1" Pop.
"hai!"
"hi."
"I just went out and rode Moondancer!!! SHE IS SO PRETTY!!!!"
"Cool."
"are you?....."
"NO NO NO!!!!! I would never be!" (which was a lie).
"OK good because once I heard two friends got into a fight and they where never friends again don't want that to happen to us!"
"Wow"
"I'm looking online for horses"
"Cool"
"For you"
"thanks but no thanks"
"but you have A HORSE BARN IN YOUR BACKYARD EMPTY WITH LIKE 500 ACRES OF LAND!!!!!!!!"
"I know that's because my dad is a farmer"
"anyways gtg have a great day!"
Emilie swung her chair around. It wasn't feeling like a great day. She let out a large breath.
"I just wish I had a horse."
Emilie closed down the computer and went to bed.
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by Emilie
(Cheyenne, Wyoming, U.S.A.)
Peaceful struggled to get out of the truck. She kept tripping on rope...
Finally Peaceful got out. She was brought into another smelly pen. She couldn't stand the smell! People came up to her and were staring at her and laughing.
Peaceful was starting to get angry. She kicked and kicked then the woman and children ran away in terror while some of men tried to pin her down. But she was too fast for them!
Peaceful quickly ran towards the woods then ran into as tree by accident. Everything blacked out. When Peaceful woke up she found her self in a larger and more hard-to-escape
room. Same as before people were laughing at her. Peaceful remembered when she hit her head and the pain came back and her head was throbbing with pain. She laid down and tried to ignore the laughing. Soon she was fast asleep. Peaceful woke up and started to stretch when she felt a rope going around her neck she kicked but she couldn't get it off.
Finally she saw the mean old man who had taken her from her true home and killed her father. Peaceful was led out of the stinky room and into a nicer looking trailer. She hated to go into another trailer, but she had to. She peeked out from the trailer and spotted a nice looking man handing the mean man a green pile of paper.
"Here is 10,000 dollars." The man in a red shirt said. The mean man took the money and counted it, he walked away. The nice man in the white shirt walked up to the front of the trailer. It started to move. Where am I going now? Peaceful thought.
Up next - Peaceful... and The Long travel
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by Emilie
(Wyoming)
Peaceful was tired she couldn't stand to be in that trailer any longer! But she must stay still. She didn't want any thing or anyone to harm her. After awhile the trailer jolted which made her fall down. She got back up and looked out from the little windows. The trailer came around a corner and jolted again. Peaceful didn't want to miss a single thing, so she quickly jumped up again. The trailer stopped at a blue, friendly, looking house.
Peaceful saw that there was a blue little house too. She was very confused then she saw a large open area in the back. She was getting excited. The man in the red shirt pulled her out into the "little" house. The man's name was Jeramy. Jeramy was a nice old man. He smiled than gave me sweet-smelling oats. I ate them greedily. He hooked on a pail of cold water too. Jeramy disappeared into his house.