Even better than the first part! I like how you describe the human and trailer from Peaceful's point of view, but still making it quite obvious what they are. Also, Peaceful is really starting to develop as a character; she's learned her first lesson, on how recklessness can affect others. Please write Part III!
Feb 02, 2011 Rating
Nice!!!! by: Eva
Wow this is really exciting. I can't wait for part three
