Write more! It is an awesome story and you are very talented writer! ;-)
May 21, 2016 Rating
story by: Haddie
Nice and very exciting! Please write more!
May 15, 2016 Rating
Love your story! by: Beckie
I love your story! Please write more! Can you read my story too? It is called Midnight the Black Stallion. Please read it and comment! Thanks! :)
May 14, 2016 Rating
Nice by: Anonymous
I like how the story does not seem rushed. It already seems unique. Keep writing, I cant wait for more!
May 14, 2016 Rating
Really great! by: Claudiahorselovr
Full of energy! The guy in the SUV was so annoying to do that to Lisa's dad! I live out in the country, so I know everyone has guns in the country! My parents are from South Africa, and my dad had a gun license. He had lots of guns, LEGALLY! He would go to the gun range to practice, so he wouldn't shoot anyone by mistake! Anyway, keep writing! You left me hanging! Please read my story, Aroura the Appaloosa!
