I just realized my brother must have written part 3 lol ......siblings......
Dec 10, 2021 Rating
You HAVE to keep writing!!! by: Bailey The Horse Lover
I LOVE this story! I really want to know what happens next! It is so exciting! I really want to know why Elsa left, and how Lynx died! I love the name Lynx for a horse! It is one of my new favorites! Keep going!
Nov 25, 2021 Rating
Abigail by: Katie
Thanks for your nice comment! My brother Chase and I really like creating stories, and this is one we've been making for our little sister. I'll have to ask my brother, but I think we made her to be about seventeen and Elkanah around that. Have a great day! XOXO
Nov 11, 2021 Rating
Elsa's Redemption Part 4 by: Katie
Elsa shuddered. "Your grandfather's... spirit.." She paused for a second. "You don't really believe that do you, Elk?"
"Of course I believe it," he answered. "I would not be a real member of my people if I did not."
"Elkhanah, here is the part of my story I am willing to tell you," she remarked, ignoring his comment. "I am sixteen years old, and I come from Munich, Germany. Sometimes people do things that they cannot tell other people about and they end up in crazy places they never imagined ending up in."
"I get that," Elkhanah said slowly. "My homeland is where the sun is not always warm yet not always cold. I am fifteen winters old."
"Elkhanah, why can we speak the same language? Why do we understand each other?"
Nov 09, 2021 Rating
Wow this story is great! by: Bailey The Horse Lover
I love your story so far! Keep writing! I want to know what happens next!
Sep 08, 2021 Rating
Kate by: Abigail
Kate,
Great job! You are doing a great job.
I hope you keep writing. I do have a few questions. how old is Elsa? How old is the boy? I do some writing myself. You are already doing a good job. Keep writing don't get discouraged if someone doesn't like it. There is always going to be someone that doesn't like it. but keep going. And enjoy writing. You should always enjoy writing. Keep writing you're doing great! And hurry, I am excited to read more!
Your horse crazy friend, Abigail
Jun 30, 2021 Rating
Elsa's Redemption Part 3 by: Katie
I think I want to know, Elsa," Elkanah said slowly. "You see, I'm on a journey too."
"But you surely have done no wrong-not like I have!" Elsa cried in distress.
"Not exactly, but can't you see? I'm all alone, and this is not my native country either." There was silence for a moment as Elsa contemplated this.
"I see what you mean-you're only a boy-only a child!Why are you out her all alone?" Elsa demanded.
"I could ask you the same question," Elkanah said quietly.
A sudden whoosh startled them.
"What was that!"cried Elsa, afraid because it was a sound from her past.
"I think it was my grandfather's spirit."
May 13, 2021 Rating
Part 2 by: Katie
Part 2
The boy looked at Elsa thoughtfully, wondering why and how this girl had come to know his grandfather and what she was hiding behind those fierce blue eyes.
"I lost my horse on this journey as well," Elkanah said hoarsely. "We are making the same journey-for honor- for life- for our people."
"Not...exactly." Elsa winced, recalling her reasons for going on this path. It was to erase a mistake that had been made in the past-one Elsa regretted with all her heart.
"Why did you come here then? This is a far, far long way from your home," Elkhanah said with ease.
"I...did something no one deserves to know. If you know you will despise me and many people already do. More horror I cannot bear," Elsa turned away, looking as if to another realm.
To be continued! Please comment!
May 06, 2021 Rating
Good story by: Anonymous
Great job! I'm really enjoying Elsa's Redemption. I can't wait to read part 2! 😊
Apr 29, 2021 Rating
hey dudes by: Katie
Hey, I doubt anyone has read this, but if you have please comment, thanks!
