It's very good, but a little... unreal. 88 to 9 ft high? If she is a teenager, that's unreal. That is nearly double my height! I'm 5ft 1in. I've watched show jumpers jump, PROFESSIONAL SHOW JUMPERS, IN THEIR 30S, and they only jumped 7, maybe 8. I feel like this girl in the story was unreal, like she wanted everyone to look up to her, a bit too boastful and cantering in arena? But please, keep writing!
Dec 29, 2014 Rating
keep writing by: Sydney from HorseCrazyGirls.com
Sorry it took a while to post it. Hope you'll post part II!
