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May 03, 2011
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Thanks Unicorn!
by: Shine

Thanks a lot Unicorn. yeah, I'm really trying to improve my writing. More info, more flashed out plot, ya know? Well thanks again. I have a question, I can't find part 1 for "More then a Myth". Could you tell me where to find them?

Apr 29, 2011
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Hi Shine
by: Unicorn

This is great stuff! It's a much more fleshed-out plot with better characters than in "Apollo", you're definitely growing well as a writer. Do keep going! It's absolutely fascinating!
Write on!

Unicorn
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"More than a Myth" Intro, Part I, Part II

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