Real nice! I love your description and your characters. Please keep going!
May 01, 2011 Rating
Hi Lauren by: Unicorn
WOW! This story has Wow Factor! :) Take a look at the opening of this story if you want to know ways to spruce up "Dream Delilah". It's absolutely mind-blowing, how good your progress as a writer is. You go, girl! It's amazing! Keep writing!
Unicorn author of: "More than a Myth" Intro, Part I, Part II
Apr 30, 2011 Rating
WOW by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider
AMAZING! I love this story! I think its awesome that it's now based on Sarah's daughter! :) Great job! I think i might even like this better than the first one!
Apr 28, 2011 Rating
comment tons by: Lauren
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE COMMENT also let me know if I should make these two sequels into books? GiVE your opinion!
