I hope Emma can help Red to trust again! This was a great story. But try adding more detail please. Because I was wondering while reading this story: How did her parents find her? Try adding more detail and such.
Check out my story Summer Camp Mystery sometime too plz.:)
May 09, 2011 Rating
Wonderfull! by: Shine
This is really good! I like how you describe the horse! And your characters, I really do love them. Keep writing!
