I love it it moves me. I can hear the screams feel the pain and see the lightning. Keep writing!
Apr 27, 2011 Rating
Hi Ciarith by: Unicorn
I am so sorry for not commenting earlier! I loooove this story, but I didn't see it before now! This part is as fabulous as ever - still a few run-on sentences, but I still adore the characters, the setting, the plot... Your descriptions are just beautiful. Please keep on writing. I look forward to every part.
