Hi! This is a truly lovely story! The friendship of the horse and dove reminds me of the book "King of the Wind," in which a horse and a cat are very good friends! Totally 5 stars!
To Anonymous and Sam: I have seen several of your comments on this site, or rather, in this section of the site. You seem to leave negative, low-star comments on all of the stories you read, for I don't recall any positive or complimentary words in any of them. However, I have not seen any contributions by you. I would personally appreciate it if you would post a story of your own.
Windcall *:-) JESUSLUVSU!
Nov 16, 2008 Rating
Great story.......... by: Summer
I love your story only it needs a lot more detail and as Sam said "exitement"
Jul 05, 2008 Rating
that's a cool story! by: Jessica
Hi it's Jessica. I really like that story. did you and your friend really make it up? I like to write also. But my stuff kinda stinks. Good luck writing another story!
Nov 20, 2008 Rating
Ok by: Anonymous
It was ok. But still, please continue.
Read my story, Over The Bit!
Jul 17, 2008 Rating
Hi, I guess. by: Anonymous
Okay? You need to work on your grammar. It is a pain in the neck to try and understand what you are saying. Try and make these more often: ', " . - and ? !. This is a note from Sam, my friend. hi, I'm Sam. you needed a little more excitement in that story. i write plays and stuff all the time, so trust me. maybe the man that caught them find them escaping.
