This was done real good! Just needs detail but keep going! Want part 2 please!
Feb 08, 2011 Rating
thanks by: Horse girl
guys thanks! plus, the names and descriptions will come later on don't worry if i don't post one soon its either cause i didn't have the chance or because i want more people to see it first. if you really want the next won what it will be up there soon.
Feb 05, 2011 Rating
Write again soon! by: Unicorn
Your story has a professional tone and a strong plot. I like it! All I can suggest is perhaps to put in a little bit more description - what do Sable and Lola look like? what does the abusive trainer look like? what kind of a day is it outside? - and maybe to tell us a few more names (the boyfriend's name, the bad trainer's name, possibly.) However, the story is very good as it is. Please write soon!
Feb 03, 2011 Rating
please by: Horse girl
hey guys please comment. its not true don't worry.
