Thank you ashaya, are you writing any stories on this site? If yes write the names.
Mar 08, 2011 Rating
love it!!!! by: aysha
hey, i love love this story. it shows how max's sister really loves her brother. hope you have more stories.
Feb 14, 2011 Rating
Thanx by: ranchgirl (author)
Thanx for telling me. I will write part 2. I am glad you like it.
Feb 13, 2011 Rating
Sorry! by: Unicorn
Hi Ranchgirl, I'm sorry I didn't see your story earlier or I would have commented! So glad you're putting in the extra effort to rewrite it. It's much better - though it was good enough in the beginning - there is more plot, more excitement, and better description. Please write Part 2. And thanks for sharing!
Feb 08, 2011 Rating
Yay! by: Shine
Please put part 2! And real soon! Its really good how you rewrote this! And the part when Max was riding Snowy, bareback and all, was just great!
Jan 31, 2011 Rating
P.S. by: ranchgirl (author)
If nobody is going to comment I am not going to write until someone tells me to.
