wow! i really love your story! your a really good writer.
May 11, 2012 Rating
Hi again Doree by: Unicorn
AAAARGHHHHH! How come it stops THERE??? I need MORE!! Don't worry! This is the reaction you want with a cliffhanger ending like yours! I simply can't wait to read the next part. You built the tension up very nicely. Just look out for typing errors - "ridicules" should have been "ridiculous". They're tricky things and hard to spot, but careful proofreading can help to catch some of them. Thanks for commenting on my story :-)
