Author of The Accident and Diary of a Horse WHisperer by: Anonymous
Yeah I think you should put that as the last sentence but awesome job and keep writing.
Aug 30, 2011 Rating
GOOD by: ranchgirl
I like how you wrote this, keep writing!
Aug 30, 2011 Rating
:) by: Anonymous
AHHH, WRITE MOREEE!!! One thing I think you should change the last sentence to is:
Suddenly out of nowhere, fudge rears up, "AHHHH" Natasha screams, as she slips backwards, off the saddle! "NATASHA!" I yelled as Natasha's body hits the ground.
