I am so glad you all like it. I should be done with part 2 by tomorrow. :)
Dec 21, 2011 Rating
keep on writtin' by: Anonymous
so awesome- it was so captivating, it kept me on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen to Albadar and Brenda!!
Dec 20, 2011 Rating
LOVE IT!!!:) by: Bella^_^
I LOVE this story, you should totally continue it:)
Dec 19, 2011 Rating
Cool by: Arizona
I love this story! You should seriously make the second part asap!
Dec 18, 2011 Rating
hmm by: lucinda
hmm I think I can guess what is going to happen but I don't want to spoil it for anyone.
also I want to apologize because the day before I read this I put out a story quite similar I was not trying to copy I was planning to do it for ages before I put it out but I do not believe that you copied mine.
Dec 18, 2011 Rating
the only thing wrong by: lucinda
the only thing wrong in the story you said is the mare that bit the man was a bay when the picture is of a palomino otherwise GOOD STORY
Dec 16, 2011 Rating
thx by: Anonymous
Thanks. I agree it is sad, but you will be surprised when I am done. I am working on part 2 right now. It should be done soon. :)
