What really grabbed me about this work was the title. "The Forgotten Filly" has a most beautiful ring to it - in this case the alliteration sounds rhythmic, not corny.
Please write more, Rebekah!
Dec 28, 2010 Rating
Good story! by: Anonymous
That was a very good (but sad) story! I can't wait for it to be continued!!
Dec 27, 2010 Rating
i wish I culd rate this 500000000 stars! by: Rayna
Oh I would be so mad! Lol great story! can't wait for part 2!
Dec 31, 2010 Rating
great story by: Daisy
great story though it could use a little more detail. but I wish I could help the filly. I would've done the same thing. can't wait for part 2!
