I love it! Sundancer caught my attention at once. And the typos are all gone (at least, I didn't find any...) Can't wait to hear what happens next. A suggestion: Perhaps a little more about Charlie's house, please. Does she live in a cottage or a huge old farmhouse? A log cabin or a flat? Contrast, or compare, her house to her stable, to make it interesting. Please write on!
Apr 12, 2011 Rating
Awesome story by: Elise
I love the story you have going on here, it's really nice. Just wanted to comment (on an earlier comment) An Arabian/American Saddlebred Cross is actually called a National Show Horse.
Love the pictures, too.
Apr 11, 2011 Rating
REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!! by: Lauren
This story is really great. Much better than the first few!!!!!!!
Did you know that an arab-Saddlebred cross is called an American Show Horse ????????
It's a relitively new breed.
By the way, I wrote the rest of Dream Delilah. PLEASE COMMENT FOR SEQUEL SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
