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Jul 06, 2011
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AWESOME!!
by: Allyson

I love this story! I will be watching for part 2! :)

Dec 23, 2010
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Nice
by: Anonymous

Nice story, Rayna (brilliant name, by the way). I already like your lead character, as well as Domino. I predict that this new convict will help them all escape!

The only problem I can see with your story is a few times you stumble over sentence transitions - forget a full stop or to capitalise the first letter of a sentence. But I know how it is... you're caught up in the story and you just zoom along, the writing is cool and you'll just have to fix those typos in the revisions.

Please continue!

Dec 23, 2010
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:D
by: Lex

Please Write More :) You're Good.

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