Thanks for your comment Unicorn! I'm glad you like the story and I will be posting more of it soon.
Aug 13, 2011 Rating
Hi Eva by: Unicorn
The next installment in this charming story doesn't disappoint. I love it! Please keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens between Connie and Pam, and I like the insight into Pam's character when we learn that her father has died. Keep writing
Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth" Intro and Parts 1 - 3
Aug 11, 2011 Rating
nice by: Anonymous
nice!
Aug 15, 2011 Rating
Good... by: TG
I liked your first part better, because this one, I feel like, just switched from first-person to third-person point of view. Other than that, though, it was pretty good!
