i love it!! you're a natural born writer. please write part 3 soon.
Feb 02, 2011 Rating
cool by: Anonymous
wow that's a really nice story, cant wait for part 2
Feb 01, 2011 Rating
whoa by: Amy Loves Tango The Horse
This is really good please keep going!
Feb 01, 2011 Rating
I like it! by: Pony
Your story is great, and the man fascinates me. You seem to have a great plot so far, and it's very detailed. I suggest you make the story a little bit longer if possible, and add some descriptive language, or maybe a simile or metaphor! Continue writing, and please post part 2!
Jan 31, 2011 Rating
Starlight by: Unicorn
Hooray! Yes please post Part 3, I can't wait to hear what happens next to poor Starlight. There's a lot more detail in this part. I love the character of Starlight, and the plot is strong. Write more, please!
