Hi. Great story. I made my first story on here a few days ago. It is called "The Last Hope" It only has one comment. Would you mind reading it and posting your thoughts? Thanks! :)
Jan 28, 2011 Rating
Thanks!!!! by: E va
Thanks for all your support guys (or should I say, girls). Unicorn, I know the story style isn't that good but it's the first time I've done anything like this. Next part on the way!!!
Jan 27, 2011 Rating
Wow.. just wow... by: Anonymous
That is an amazing story!!!!! PLEASE PUT PART TWO I'M VERY EAGER!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jan 27, 2011 Rating
please by: meghan
Please make a second, I love the first one!
Jan 27, 2011 Rating
hi!!! by: luvhorses
I really like it!!
Jan 27, 2011 Rating
Starlight by: Unicorn
This story could get very good! The opening is fine, quickly establishing voice and conflict. A little more detail - what does Starlight look like? Was he feisty and difficult to back, or placid and quiet? Did he like his old home? - might make the story a bit more fleshed-out. This has the makings of a winner.
Jan 26, 2011 Rating
this is great!!!! by: Sarah
I just love your story! When is the next part coming out? I can't wait!!
