This story is so enchanting. please write part 3. I finished Dream Delilah. comment for more stories by me.
Apr 04, 2011 Rating
Great Job by: Elise
I have to say that I was thoroughly enchanted when I read the first part of 'Silent Hoofbeats'. I love the way you portrayed the angel and her horses, and I could visualize it so clearly! When I first read 'One Wish', I didn't quite get the ending. But now I understand. You pulled it all together with a sparkling bow of excellence! Please write more, and let me know when you will write Part 3!
Also, please visit both my stories ('Ocean Eyes' & 'The Horse with Ocean Eyes') and let me know which one you'd like me to write Part 2 for (if you haven't already done so).
Apr 01, 2011 Rating
Hi Jazzy by: Unicorn
I love it! And thanks for picking the title I came up with. How come I can never think of titles for my own stories? I like the detail, like Woody's fluffy forelock, the angel's chestnut proudly following. You also said (in the comment section of the previous part) that you'd written a book - congratulations! Hope to see it in print soon! Just be prepared, publishing is hard stuff. Be ready to be rejected often. But don't just send it out to one publisher and then give up should they reject it. Never give up. Just keep sending it out. If you haven't done so already, it would be a good idea to get some beta readers - friends or siblings - to read your story and give you some friendly criticism before you send it out. When you get it published, be sure to tell us! I'll definitely want to read it! Keep writing!
P. S. I came up with the title for Silent Hoofbeats (... or rather just pulled it off the top of my addled head) so why don't you look in on my story, "More than a Myth"? I don't think it's a patch on yours, but writers are notoriously bad judges of their own work. Thanks!
