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Feb 19, 2009
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Hey Windcall!
by: Christina

Wow! It's amazing how well you express yourself in words! Your stories are so imaginative and suspenseful! Just the kind of stuff I like to read! By the way I showed my sister Ashley your story and she thinks you should become a writer too! :)

Dec 21, 2008
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Hi Anna and Summer!
by: Windcall

Hey Anna and Summer!

Summer: I would already have posted Chapter 2, but my family has been busy beyond belief. I haven't been able to finish all my changes! I'll try to submit it soon.

Anna: Thanks for your comment! About hiring you someday, it could take a while, because I'm only fourteen (will be tomorrow, lol). But that doesn't change my opinion on your talent!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR SKETCH!!!!!! Have you read Vice Versa yet? Or any of my pages (Dreamer 1-7), for that matter? I would really like for you to read them!

Hope to hear from BOTH of you again! Merry, MERRY Christmas!!!!!!

Windcall *:-)
JESUSLUVSU!

Dec 06, 2008
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To Windcall
by: Anna

Hey I got your comment on my picture and thanks!!!(Go to my picture drawing again i commented back to you))) Well i read this chapter and i think its really good! And as soon as i read the first paragraph a pictured popped into my head that would be perfect for that first chapter!!! ill draw it for you and ill let you know as soon as i post it! (i just posted another picture but this time its a painting)

Nov 20, 2008
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Hi Windcall
by: SUMMER

Chapter 1 is kinda nice. I'm waiting for chapter2.
It's interesting. Maybe you can make it into a proper book one day.........-SUMMER

Nov 16, 2008
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Chapter 2 Coming Soon!
by: Windcall

Hey,

This is the author of this story (Windcall). I just wanted to notify any readers that Chapter 2 of RACE HORSE will be submitted as soon as I fix the roughly one million grammatical errors, change most of the adjectives, and revise some of the storyline. Amazing how terribly I wrote the first few chapters of this two-year-old book!

Windcall *:-)
JESUSLUVSU!

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