I am actually trying to get the story into a document and get it published. Hope I do! (By the way, it may take longer to enter stories because I have moved to England! Yay!)
Jan 09, 2011 Rating
Prince by: Anonymous
Stick to the writing, girl, you're talented! You could work a bit more on adding description and detail, but the plot and characters are extremely well done. The characters are 3-D, they're all very real. The plot is strong. Perhaps a bit more detail, though - what was Baila wearing? What did the barn smell like? Was it cold outside? Did Prince neigh in greeting, or sulk at the back of his stable? Just a suggestion! Thanks for working so hard at this story and going on with it. Keep working and this could become a published story!
Jan 08, 2011 Rating
What happens next?! by: Shine
I cannot wait for part 8, please hurry! It's so cool!
Jan 08, 2011 Rating
Hey by: Haley
Hey, I've been following your prince parts and I think if you put them all together you could make a book and try to publish it!
