Thank you so much for your help! I have been a little stuck on part 8 do if you (or anyone else) has any ideas for it, please comment on Part 7. Also, thank you for the constructive criticism. I really do enjoy hearing all the wonderful things you guys have to say about Prince and Baila's adventures. Thank you for reading!
Jan 08, 2011 Rating
Prince by: Anonymous
I've been following the story from Part One and am loving it! Can't wait to see what happens next to Baila! I liked the flash-forward at the beginning. My only suggestion: Perhaps give us a little less at the beginning - maybe up to the part where we realize that Baila and Prince aren't going to make the jump. Just a suggestion. Otherwise I really like the story, especially since Jesse isn't suddenly perfect, she still retains a little of her snobbish personality, but is a nice girl underneath.
Jan 07, 2011 Rating
Dear Anonymous by: Izzy
Dear Anonymous,
I bring you great joy to tell you that I am working Prince the novel. Hopefully I may get it published!
Jan 06, 2011 Rating
Thanks! by: Shine
Your stories are so good! Thanks so much! And keep writing!
Jan 06, 2011 Rating
cool! by: Anonymous
Awesome! The tension is up! PLEASE write more! This could become a great book!
