I love how you have used the Chocolate Box girls series names! They sound really good, but maybe next time you could have used original names, not copying? Apart from that it's really good, but Cherrys a Mary-Sue, which us annoying. After all, everyone loves a person with flaws! Please update soon!
Apr 28, 2011 Rating
To Unicorn by: Morgyn
Hey Unicorn! I'll look out for your stories!!! Please have a look at Pony Whisperer:Book 1: Word Spreads Out chapter 2!!! I hope there is more description in it!!! xoxo
Apr 27, 2011 Rating
Hi by: Unicorn
Haha, you're not a dingbat! Everyone forgets things. Keep writing!
Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth"
Apr 20, 2011 Rating
I see!!! by: Morgyn
I know!!! I completely forgot!!! I am SUCH a Dingbat!!!! In the next chapter/part I'll make SURE I put in more description!!!
Apr 15, 2011 Rating
Your story by: Unicorn
I like it! And not only because my horse's name is Skye... :) Could we have a bit more setting, please? Where are they riding? Is Star in a stable, or out in a paddock? Are they riding Western or English? What's the weather like? Just to give me a picture in my head. Please write on! I love the idea of the Pony Whisperer.
Apr 13, 2011 Rating
Wow!!! by: Stella
Cool story!!! So is Cherry a Pony Whisperer now??? And how did you think of the name Cherry??? Oh, and Skye??? Summer I can understand. When's Chapter Two coming out??????!!!!!!?????? :-)
