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May 02, 2011
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by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider

OMG! This is fantastic! Like the way your character can talk and understand the horses! It makes everyone wonder how she knows what is wrong with their horses! That's amazing. Write more soon pls!:):]
May 02, 2011
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by: Morgyn

Hi Unicorn! I forgot to put in that Summer was whining that Coco was out of control because Coco was bumping into Cola. I'm SO sorry you got mixed up!!! Also, thanks for commenting!!! xoxo xxx
Apr 29, 2011
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by: Unicorn

You write very deft and flowing prose - I like it. It's a nice concept, too, the Pony Whisperer, and I like how you're letting the narrator's gift influence the world around her, you're not just letting it sit there.

Oh, I got confused at one point between Summer and Shay, you seem to be mixing up their names a bit. Just review it, assign each name to each character and stick with it. They've got such similar names it's easy to get mixed up!
Keep writing! It's a stunning story.

Unicorn
writer of:
"More than a Myth" Intro, Part I and Part II

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