No Title Yet (Any Suggestions>) - Part 1

by Evangeline
(Anchorage Alaska)

The first sound I heard was the squeaking of the Rookling's old wheelbarrow. Julie was doing the morning feeds. I got up and stretched. Brr. It was cold in the crisp, moist morning air of the Virginia fog. I tossed some of the clothes at the foot of my bed. With one last longing look at my warm bed, I head out.

My name is Lee. Most people call me Lee 'cause my real name, Jubilee, is a bit of a mouthful. I am 12 and I live in the Morning Light Animal Rescue and Breeding Center. Morning Light Ranch for short. They can't fit foster home into the already-long-name so they leave it out, but that's why I'm here. I'm an orphan. My parents died when I was little (4 or 5) and my mom's distant relative was Mrs. Rookling.

Mr. and Mrs. Rookling (they tell the kids to call them Fred and Susie) are the closest I remember at having parents, and their as good as them. Their hearts are always open and they have an adoption day every month for kids and animals. The other reason I love it here is because the horses and Ace (he's really not into other kids,you can tell by the way he bucks them off).

'I knew how to ride before I knew how to walk'is a favorite statement of Susie's. My mother was really into horses and I got my first when I was 3. He came with me to the ranch but he died a few years ago.

Julie broke through my thoughts.

"Come on Lee! I've been up for an hour," she teased.

"What?" I shot back. "Flashing those long lashes at Job?"

We giggled and got to work.

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Sep 04, 2011
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Niice!!
by: Doree

I like it! Your story is really good! Please check out my story, 'Perfectly me' part 1 and coming soon, part 2!

Aug 20, 2011
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Story title is.....
by: Anonymous

the story title is going to be "Reaching The Hungry" and, if you keep reading the story, you might find out why!

Aug 01, 2011
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Thanks, guys!!
by: Evangeline

thanks. if you like these you might like my others (one story's finished,one not) "Raven-wild stallion of the north" and "Polar North".

Aug 01, 2011
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Sorry!
by: TG

When I said Moonlight, I meant Morning Light! I just forgot which one! (I have a very short memory span!)

Aug 01, 2011
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Loved it!
by: TG

Hey! I love your story! I have a couple suggestions for a title, too!
Here they are: Moonlight Ranch
Moonlight Animal Rescue
and Adventures at Moonlight Ranch!
Hope you like 'em!

Jul 29, 2011
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Great Job!
by: Rayna

wow what a nice story! I'm not sure about the title......you'll have to think about that one! Be creative! ^^

Jul 28, 2011
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:)
by: Anonymous

you could just put morning light animal rescue shelter for the title :)

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