this story is so nice best love/horse story. i like it a lot. keep on writing.
Jan 19, 2011 Rating
author by: Anonymous
hey guys thanks for your comments. Again lots of homework, but so close to finishing will definitely have the 4th maybe the 5th, but i have a lot of studying. Ugh! middle school. Elementary was so easy. I can totally wait until high school!
Jan 19, 2011 Rating
I luv it! by: Amber (see Moonshadow)
This is much better than the last two. The grammar is so much better. Suspense is building. You are almost an author. The only thing you forgot is the details. But you added them at the end so over all this story rocks. Sometimes in my comments I use txt-talk by the way. Just a little tip from a fellow writer. Also if you are a fan of Moonshadow then I'm sorry for not writing for a few days. but my computer is jacked up and won't submit stories but it'll submit comments.
you should definitely keep going.
Jan 19, 2011 Rating
Red by: Anonymous
Your story improves with every part. The grammar here is much better and you're building up the suspense well, also doing a good job of developing the character of Amelia even though the reader has never met her. Thanks for sharing this.
Jan 18, 2011 Rating
some tips by: Anonymous
I am the author and Taylor is a counselor from the camp this is based around splendor farms.
