write a 3rd chapter in a hurry we need it....... a lot.
Jan 18, 2011 Rating
nice!! by: Anonymous
i just love your stories. i think you could name your story as "heartbroken or miracles." you should definitely write a third, maybe even a fourth.
Jan 18, 2011 Rating
hey by: Anonymous
thanks guys. i just went back to school today. i made all my stories yesterday and i have lots of homework, ut i come on every night so i will try to write the third tonight. thanks for the support!
Jan 18, 2011 Rating
Pretty good by: Amber (see Moonshadow)
Your story is pretty good, but you should work on beefing it up and grammar. You should definitely write a third.
As for the name...
If your horse is white - Peppermint, Frosty Dappled grey - Silver Flower, Jade, Grey Palomino - Sunny, Zippo, Gold Star, Rusty colored - Rusty, Red, Ariel Brown - Flash, Dusty, Geronimo, Lacy, Crystal Bay - Bay, Magic, BayBay, Baby, Missy Black - BlackJack, Camancie, Midnight, Moonshadow Paint - General, Elvis, Prissy, Rain, Appaloosa - Speckles, Brownie, Dots
