I do love this story! Please write more. I still like the characterisation of Lex and I can see Nightmare steadily developing. You were sorry that the stories were "boring". They're not, actually - but in this part (not the others) very little seems to happen. It's something I do a lot and it frustrates me endlessly, so don't fall into the same trap. If a sentence/word/paragraph/chapter isn't contributing to the story, it must go. Cut it out, throw it away, keep writing. In any case, this is a great story and you are a very talented writer. Keep going, please! Happy writing. Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth" Intro, Part I, Part II
May 17, 2011 Rating
More? by: ExWow
Again, if you want more, please comment. I'm sorry this one and the last one was so boring, I promise they will get more exciting. This one is probably the most boring.
