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Dec 14, 2014
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My unique stardust part three
by: Maria

Thank you to all the horse crazy girls who liked part 1 and 2.

I walked into the room...
Mum stood up. I saw the tears streaming down her face. She stood up and walked towards me as if she couldn't believe that I was real. "Maria" she whispered.

Soon I had a bandage around my arm and I was lying in my bed. I didn't want to rest like my parents had told me to. I told them about Stardust and they said they would search the forests later but I didn't want to wait any longer so I waited until night.

When the sky had finally gone dark and my parents were in bed I sneaked downstairs into the kitchen. I grabbed my rucksack, coat and a few carrots. I slowly unlocked the back door and slipped out into the cool night.

I followed the path to the woods. The branches snapped underneath my feet. I tried to quieten my footsteps because they could scare the horses away. I stopped underneath a tree for a snack when I saw the black stallion standing a few yards away from me. His coat shimmered int the dark and his cold eyes stared into my than like thin air he vanished...

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Dec 14, 2014
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thank you
by: Maria

Thank you readers. I will make sure that I post part 3 soon

Dec 14, 2014
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thank you
by: Maria

thank you, for commenting part 3 will be coming out soon

Nov 29, 2014
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sweet
by: Anonymous

I loved it! It is awesome!

Nov 24, 2014
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Stardust
by: Bubbles

Yay, I love greys and this is a good story.

Nov 08, 2014
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Waiting for Part III
by: Sydney from HorseCrazyGirls.com

I agree - looking forward to part 3! Be sure to post it as a comment so we can keep the story all together. :)

Nov 04, 2014
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My Unique Stardust - Part 2
by: Maria

I am really glad you all enjoyed part 1, so here's part 2!

I stood up and walked in a different direction to the cry, I hoped I wouldn’t bump into the person or creature who had made that deafening noise.

I walked around in circles – all the trees looked the same to me – until I walked into a clearing.
I sighed with relief then looked around to try to figure out where I was.

In the distance I saw a huge herd of wild ponies. I blinked trying to find a dappled grey horse with a bridle and saddle on. I saw her standing in the middle. I tried counting how many wild horses there were but they galloped away before I could finish, Stardust with them.

The sun rose in the horizon. I carried on walking till I reached a familiar fence. I realised I was near my house so I just walked on. As my house came into view so did a police car. I stayed where I did, not want to walk further. Sweat poured down my forehead and my arm thrived with pain. I could feel blood trickling down but I didn’t want that to discourage me.

I wondered about how worried my parents would be when they found me and how much trouble I would be in with the police. When the car finally left I trudged back into the house.

The door was open so I helped myself in. I heard crying as I made my way into the kitchen.

"She’s lost," I heard someone sob.
"I’m sure she is alright," said dad.
"What if they can’t find her?" said mum.
I couldn’t wait any longer. I walked into the room...

Please comment for part 3. If you haven’t already read My Unique Stardust Part 1, please read it and tell me what you think. Be sure to comment.

Jul 10, 2014
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Gbgvtb
by: Anonymous

You did really good!

Feb 19, 2014
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Hi thanks
by: Mara

Hi thanks for the comments. Part 2 will come out soon. If you like this sorry you will surely love my new series called Dear Misty.

Feb 07, 2014
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Cool Story
by: Anonymous

Hi I love horses and this story was great please carry on. I'm intrigued to find out what happens.

Jan 20, 2014
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Stardust
by: Anonymous

Very good!

Jan 04, 2014
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Love it!
by: horseluver4evernever

keep going! I love it!

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