I dropped everything and ran, the redwood paint splling on the dry grassy plain. Running to the source of the horse's scream, I found myself running towards the show-jumping ring. A girl named Michelle was jumping(or trying to) jump a frisky, flaxen chestnut Arabian named Vixen. "Jump you good for nothing pony!" she screeched. After a few snaps of a whip, Vixen, eyes-rolling, obliged. She leaped into the air, but not coming off at the correct pace, met the bars, and came crashing to Earth.
(thank you so much for the suggestion Sydney! i already did a part 2 page, but i'm not sure if it's on)
Jun 21, 2010 Rating
Thanks! by: Anonymous
Sydney, that's a really good suggestion, i think I'll try it! part 2 coming soon!
Jun 20, 2010 Rating
comment by: Rayna
Ohh. In the beginning some people would think. "This is kinda boring." but if you keep reading, the ending is a bit intriguing! add part two soon please!
Jun 16, 2010 Rating
keep going...! by: Sydney
It's a good start...! Can't wait to read more of your horse story. (Be sure to post using the comments link so it will all stay together...)
