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Aug 25, 2020
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I luv this story!!!!!
by: Anonymous

I love you this story so much! I've read it a hundred times and I never get tired of it! It is very well-written! Please continue this story!! :)

Aug 15, 2020
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I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!
by: Anonymous

I love this story. Pls continue it!!! :)

Dec 01, 2017
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More
by: Horselover17

I need more please, you are so good at writing!

Oct 04, 2017
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Sorry!
by: Regan

I haven't been able to update the story recently, but I promise part 6 coming soon!

Sep 22, 2017
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yay!
by: kat/Hoofprints in the Clouds

I'm so glad you've kept writing!
This story line is so good! you have me hooked!
please keep writing!
Can't wait for the next part!

Sep 20, 2017
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Part Five
by: Regan

Part Five

"Annabelle!" I scream, "Why are you riding my horse?" Annabelle looks confused and says, "Heather said it was okay."

Rage boils up inside of me. Hadn’t I told her Heather was bad news?

"Get. Off. My. Horse. NOW." Annabelle doesn’t need to be told twice. She immediately dismounts Slim.

"I’m sorry," says Annabelle. I ignore her as I mount Slim.

"Heather tricked me! I’m so so sorry."

Once again, I ignore her. "Kelly! Do you hear me?" yells Annabelle.

I whip around and glare at her. "I trusted you," I say coldly, "You’ve lost my trust. Bye Annabelle." With that, Erica and I ride away.

"It’s okay," says Erica as my eyes swell up with tears.

"It’s just... it’s just that I trusted her and now..." I murmur.

Erica gives me a hug as we sit on my bed. "Horse movies and ice cream?" asks Erica.

"You know me so well."

The next day while Erica and I are talking on the bus we hear Heather gasp. I watch as a girl with silky auburn hair and a black halter top and royal blue skirt. She is wearing silver sandals and has mascara on her eyelashes. "Annabelle?" I ask.

Annabelle turns around and sneers at me. "Hi Kelly-Cry-Baby," she says smugly, "don’t call me Annabelle. My name is Elle." She then goes and sits down with Bridget and Heather. They whisper and giggle. Erica and I exchange surprised glances.

When the bus halts in front of the school, Heather, Bridget, and Elle all march of the bus. I bite my lip as they regroup and march side by side into the school. Each of them has practically the same length of hair. Brown, blonde, and auburn in a line.

"That was a long day," I moan as I set down my backpack.

"What happened?" asks my 15-year-old brother Jace.

"Erica has a flute recital so we can’t hang out and kids at school are being especially annoying." I sit down at the table.

There is a plate with chocolate chip cookies on them. I pick one up and take a big bite. The cookies are soft and chewy and have little bursts of chocolate throughout.

"These are so good!" I say, my mouth full of cookie, "Did Mom make these?"

Jace shakes his head, "No, I made them."

My eyes widen, "wow you are talented, these cookies are delicious." Then my phone buzzes. I pick it up and see I have received a text message... from Heather.

I read it and my heart drops. You might as well not come back to school. Everybody hates you. Have a nice day! - H. I bite my lip and my face turns scarlet.

"Kids from school?" asks Jace sympathetically.

I nod.

"I know the cure for that! A trail ride. Come on Kel."

I smile as Jace and I run to tack up our horses. I sigh as a light breeze drifts past me. Slim sighs and I give him a pat on the neck.

In front of me, Jace is riding his Appaloosa mare, Dakota. Trees sway gently and songbirds sing a sweet tune as Slim and Dakota make their way down the trail.

Sep 19, 2017
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Amazing!
by: Taneisha

I think this is one of the most inspiring stories I have ever read. I love it!

Please continue it! :D

Sep 16, 2017
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horsesome!
by: judy

Bri and Heather are horrible! Other than that, its a horsesome story about a new friendship and
two horses.

Sep 14, 2017
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SO GREAT!
by: Hoofprints in the Clouds

Heather and Bri are so horrible! The way you made them, I just feel like punching them! Please keep writing.

BTW my horse is a paint :)

Sep 11, 2017
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Nice start!
by: Hoofbeats

Nice start! Please continue.

Sep 08, 2017
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bridget & heather are haters
by: Fern

Never insult a girl's horse, hon.

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