I thought it was good and sad. I thought about the story when I was bored. And I don't care what anyone says! I did my best and that counts. (Check out Chapter 2) Coming soon!! But if you have a comment you can write it down if you want, :) Thanks for all the comments.
Aug 03, 2010 Rating
Cool by: Emma
That's a cool story and sad :(
Great job!!
Hope you'll have chapter 2 up soon! :)
Sep 08, 2010 Rating
Sad! by: Alex
That is a good story but I think you should work more on making it sound real instead of putting IDK. but it was very touching!
