I like this story a lot! Keep it going! Tyler seems like a nice girl and very determined also. Love it!
Apr 08, 2011 Rating
Hi Doree by: Unicorn
Wow! This is excellent! The conflict between Tyler and the rest of her family - especially Christine - is beautifully introduced with a good opening. You might want to watch your grammar a little, especially the use of the comma, but that's easy to learn. Please write on!
Apr 04, 2011 Rating
Fantastic by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider
The whole western girl is a great way to draw a reader in! It's very interesting to read how Tyler's parents prefer English to what you prefer! Which is western. I hope u find your horse!
Apr 04, 2011 Rating
Good! by: Anonymous
Hi, this story is really good!!! Part two please!!!!
Apr 04, 2011 Rating
Love it! by: Elise
Please write more, this sounds like a really promising story!
