Hey nice work! I really like your story! You've got some pretty good writing talent. I've really enjoyed reading both parts and I'm loving the horse's name Silverdust. I'm also writing a story that might be posted on this website. If so, the title will be Starlight Mount Pony Club. I hope you'll enjoy reading it. Oh, and keep up the good work. I hope to read more!
Apr 07, 2011 Rating
INCREDIBLE++++! by: Elise
Wow. All I can say is "WOW!" You are so amazing at adding the details, implying the emotions, and depicting real life scenarios (and characters!). I can definitely see a published book in the future...
PLEASE (I beg you) PLEASE write more. I will be waiting anxiously and on the edge of my seat for Part 2!
Apr 07, 2011 Rating
Hey Abbie by: ranchgirl
I think your story is awesome. I can't wait until part 2. I don't have as much talent as you.
Apr 07, 2011 Rating
Thank you! by: Reese
Thank you so much! I'll be sure to check out your stories; I have already read summer camp mystery. It is great! Look for part two-it will be out in the next two-three days!
Apr 06, 2011 Rating
What do u think? by: Abbie (aka Reese)
Hi! What do you think of my story? I'm not a very good writer, I'm sorry. Do you want me to write part two? Comment and reply, please!
Apr 06, 2011 Rating
Your Story by: ranchgirl
Your story is perfect. I can't wait for part 2.
Please check out my story Dream Come True. I am going to write part 3 if any one else wants it.
Apr 06, 2011 Rating
Hey Reese! by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider
Yes please continue, this was a fantastic story. The way you started made it so interesting it was impossible to stop reading! :) I really want to find out what happens!
Also check out my stories "Summer Camp Mystery (part 1,2 and 3) as well as "Dreamer-The one and only(1 2 and 3" I have others but those are my best. Write!