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Jan 15, 2011
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Thanks!
by: Hannah (Author)

Thanks so much! I love getting advice from people who know what they are talking about ;)

Also, to the person who gave me the idea for the title "Just A Dream" I'm going to change it a little but. Don't worry, it'll still be in the story, just not as the title.

Jan 11, 2011
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Writer's Block
by: Anonymous

Hey Hannah,

I've been writing for four years now, so I thought I could give you some suggestions for that awful beast named Writer's Block. You can take a break. Leave the computer alone for a week or so, even if you want to write. Let your creative energy build up a bit. Or put your butt in the chair and your fingers on the keyboard and just write, no matter how bad it is, just write and write and get it out of your system. Or, watch a horse movie. That one works for me every time!

And I didn't think it was bad at all! I really love the new horse, I was so shocked and delighted when she appeared. And if it looks bad now, then first drafts always do, for everyone: published writers do their books in many drafts, it's the best way to go. Ernest Hemingway himself said that the first draft of anything is rubbish. If your first draft is this good, then the finished article will be absolutely brilliant.

Keep writing!

Jan 10, 2011
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Thanks!
by: Hannah (Author)

Thanks everyone! I didn't think they were that good. Thanks for the encouragement! I love hearing from all the people that read this.

Celina (sorry about spelling): Don't worry, there's a surprise ending ;)

Izzy: Yup! I'm from Minnesota! England sounds pretty cool! Its pretty cold here :)

Anonymous (LOL): Thanks! :)

Jan 09, 2011
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nice
by: Anonymous

hey that was awesome!

Jan 09, 2011
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Cool
by: Izzy

Hey! I didn't know you were native to Minnesota too! I was born and raised in Minnesota. My family and I just moved to England for a year but we are coming back to the states.

Jan 09, 2011
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hey
by: Celina

that's an awesome story, are you crazy? but i would have liked it if it still has duchess in it, maybe this will help with your writer's block.
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As I went back to start the horses training, I remembered that I had used to see duchess over in a corner. She would jump the low fence, she would go to the forest through an open meadow and into a small hidden area that only she knew about. Well I did to, when I followed her one time. I remembered I hadn't looked for her there.
I tied (what the new horses name is) to a pole and called Zach. We left for the hidden field. The search was back on...

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you can use that but you don't have to if you don't want to. remember add an ending. for all you reading this, comment then i will make it a story.

p.s.
if you use this write a little thing about me please...
love to the !!!HORSES!!!
bye!

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