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Apr 10, 2011
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Ride
by: Lauren

Yeah, I was five. Back then my mom raised + trained lots of horses. I'm so sad because I didn't even like horses then. I was just sitting on my mom's lap. So, not even REALLY riding. :(

Apr 07, 2011
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WOW
by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider

You have only been on a horse once? Is that right! WOW I would have never guessed. You seem like you know lots!:O That's pretty cool. Hopefully you can ride more!

Apr 07, 2011
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Thank you so much!
by: Lauren

Wow! I guess this is the first time I've shared my stories, and it really makes me soooooooo happy to see people liking my stories and getting inspired! Also,I have only been on a horse once. The only horse knowledge I have is a year's worth of reading, and begging my mother for more horse information. What do you think about that? Please let me know.

Apr 02, 2011
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Lovely!
by: Shine

Totally better then your first one, so much better! The detail is very good, the feelings of Sarah are done splendidly well!

Mar 30, 2011
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Dream Delilah
by: Unicorn

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Not too much detail, not too little. A strong plot, but enough room for setting. A powerful main character, who draws the reader in.

My suggestions: Look out for "then". Think twice before using "then" because it's becoming a crutch word for you and there are better transitions than "then".

I like it. I like it a lot! Please write more soon!

Mar 28, 2011
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Awesome
by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider

Like I said before... this is amazing! I love your stories. Plenty of detail this time! I really want to find out how you train that beautiful horse. Its coming great.

Check out my story "The Wild Horse" as well as "Nothing short of a cowgirl"

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