Hi I'm glad you like my story. Check out part 6. I'll be writing part 7 soon.
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Apr 28, 2011 Rating
Hello Ranchgirl! by: Shine
I really love how you do both views of Monica and Kenzie. Please keep going!
Apr 28, 2011 Rating
Hi Ranchgirl by: Unicorn
Sorry for the late comment! I still adore the easy way you switch between Monica and Kenzie. They're two completely different people and you easily step into their heads. Monica is wildly emotional, but Kenzie is far more laid-back. However, I'd like to know Kenzie's reaction to the fact that Animal Control is taking away the wild stallion. Is she relieved? Angry? Bewildered? Scared? Try not to say "I was scared"; instead go for a more in-depth description: "Adrenalin burnt the soles of my feet as the farmer spoke. I could feel my heartbeat quicken. What was going to happen to the stallion?" Just as an example. Thanks for posting this up! Please write on! Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth"
