Wow Great Story! I really like the fact you are tell the story from the foals point of view! Thats pretty cool! I can wait to read Part 2!
P.S. I will tell all my horselover friends to read and comment :)
Jul 31, 2009 Rating
Thanx for commenting by: SUMMER
I've posted the next few parts.
BTW, is there two Christina's or is it just one?
Feb 03, 2009 Rating
Amazing! by: Christina
Wow! What a cool story! I especially like how you take the point of view of the foal. This story is REALLY GREAT!
Jan 31, 2009 Rating
ILT!! (ILOVETHIS!!) by: YO
POST PART 2 SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Jan 29, 2009 Rating
AMAZING! by: Christina
Hey Summer! This story is sooo cool! I love it! I'm gonna read the second part right now! You are such a good writer! Keep up the good work! --Christina
Dec 13, 2008 Rating
Hi by: SUMMER
Hi Sara, thanks for commenting. Hi Windcall. Thanks for commenting.So sorry I couldn't post the second part sooner, I was away on a camping holiday(it's summer here is South Africa). I'll post it soon. I'm glad you like it. To answer your question, Demon is the horses name ( or is going to be).I have commented on your story (I love it!).
Dec 03, 2008 Rating
Hi again by: Windcall
Hi Summer, This is Windcall again. I forgot to mention that I am also the author of Vice Versa (it's on the Cool Horse Stories page, too). Please read and comment!
Windcall *:-) JESUSLUVSU!
Dec 03, 2008 Rating
WOW!!!!!! by: Windcall
WOW!!!!!! This is an awesome cool story! PLEASE, PLEASE post the second part; you've left me hanging! I just ADORE stories that leave one hanging, don't you? Anyway, I would highly appreciate it if you would swiftly submit the subsequent chapter in your marvelous tale. But I have a question: is the colt's name Demon? Or is the title related to some other portion of your story? Do tell!
I would love for you to check out and comment on my story, Race Horse Chapter 1. If you do read it, PLEASE comment! Hope to hear from you!!!!!!
Windcall *:-) JESUSLUVSU!
Dec 01, 2008 Rating
Ooops by: SUMMER
Sorry, I forgot to leave a space between my note and the story- hope it won't confuse you
Nov 29, 2008 Rating
I loved it! by: Sara
That story, WAS AMAZING! I LOVED IT! U did a great job! Please write more!
