Wow!!! This is literally amazing!!! I LOVE it!!! I can't wait to read more! The way your characters show their emotions is fantastic! Please please please write chapter 13!!!
Oct 18, 2017 Rating
More! by: Anonymous
I absolutely love it! One of the best stories on this site! Please write a 13th chapter, it is such a cliff hanger!
Nov 09, 2016 Rating
Chapter 13 by: Zenyatta
Is there a chapter 13? IT CAN'T END HERE!
Jul 07, 2014 Rating
cool by: chaanya
The story is cool I love it but I can't find the rest of the story after the part the horse dropped her on the ground and she didn't move ...
The story is awesome! Thanks :d
Mar 21, 2014 Rating
Thanks (: by: Sadee
Thanks i've been trying hard to write but i've just been sooooooooo busy and our other computer shut down completely so i really have no where to type. I will try my best though, thanks for the lift!
Mar 17, 2014 Rating
Awesome by: Holly
I love the story so far keep writing. I want to know if sugar gets to stay at the farm. I love the story so so so so so much!
Jan 20, 2014 Rating
OMG!! by: Stormy
I LUV IT!
Jan 11, 2014 Rating
Thanks (: by: Sadee
Thanks (:
Jan 05, 2014 Rating
It's really....... by: Elizy
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dec 30, 2013 Rating
Thanks (: by: Sadee
The guy is sometimes drunk and NOT a very good father. Cathy loves him but sometimes hates him and thanks for the comment. I actually have a different book i'm working on that i'm going to get published. Its not a horse book though. ): Its still pretty cool in my opinion though. Do you have anything I can read on this website?
Dec 30, 2013 Rating
wow by: muzzlenuzzler
woooooow
the horse just saved your daughter and you won't let her keep the horse! are you nuts..
p.s: this book is awesome you should have it published :)