Thanks for the comments! Part 3 won't come out very soon... writers block! Any ideas? Thanks!
Jul 17, 2012 Rating
great story by: englishridingcwgrl
I love this story. Keep it up. The plot is interesting, and you write quite well.
Jul 17, 2012 Rating
Hi SaphireRain by: Unicorn
I'm seriously enjoying this story! You have a way with characters - very nice. Look out for confusing dialogue, like the short piece below: He smiled. "That's cool. I'd do rock climbing this summer but I'm way to busy here at the stables." I sighed. "Does lots of riders come here during the week?" He climbed up a fence and sat down. It's not quite clear who is speaking which lines, although I do know my submissions' paragraphs were messed up a bit, too, so it's not necessarily your mistake. Thank you for sharing a great story and please keep writing!
