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Sep 09, 2020
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Hi!
by: Willow

This story was good but can you please continue America? It is so good!!!

Nov 23, 2019
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Great!
by: Arabian girl

So sad but good. :( I’m a little sad it’s so short but I understand. :) you're such a great writer, if you write any more stories on this website please tell me I would like to read more of your work! :) I know this might sound kinda bad but every once in a while I like to read a sad story instead of a happily ever after type of story. But if you think about it it’s not that sad because she gets to go to heaven with her boyfriend (even though I don’t think it’s right to have a boyfriend at her age. Hope I didn’t offend any one I wasn’t meaning to offend any one or sound all strict just my personal opinion.)

P.S. I’m so happy to meet some other God love’n girls! :) :) ;)

Apr 30, 2018
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Sorry!
by: Violent Brushstroke

Lol, I personally have brown eyes, so I don't mean to offend anyone. It was just part of Sam's character. I'm not saying everyone hates brown eyes, just that Sam liked Brandon's blue's and thought they were more interesting than hers. Sorry to give you the wrong idea!

Apr 28, 2018
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hey!
by: Anonymous

What's wrong with brown eyes?! >:-(

Apr 25, 2018
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To Sally & God Believin' Cowgirl
by: Violent Brushstroke

Thank you so much! It means a lot that you like it. But I hate to break it to you, that was the end. If you look back, one of my comments said I would appreciate ideas for a sequel.

Thanks for commenting!

(P.S. I'm a God believin cowgirl too! Don't know if I'm quite a cowgirl, but definitely God believing!)

Apr 18, 2018
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Oh woah!🐎😂🤠
by: God Belivn Cowgirl

So good cowgirl! Keep em comin'!

Mar 29, 2018
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Please write more!
by: Sally

This is really good and I can't wait for more to come!

Mar 01, 2018
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Hey everyone!
by: Violent Brushstroke

Hey girlies! So, I've been thinking of writing a sequel to Broken Soul, should I? I really need some ideas for it tho. I was thinking of having it be Sean's point of view. Any ideas are appreciated!

Jan 16, 2018
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sad but good
by: #craz4horse

Thanks for writing that story I just read it and its so sad but great :)

Thanks again!

Jan 15, 2018
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To: Violent Bruststroke
by: Hoofbeats

Thanks SO much!

I'm very excited about my book and I hope that I can share my writing story on here to help other young writers get published.

And a masssive 'thank you' to you for letting me use your title. I have www.horsecrazygirls.com and this amazing community of horse loving girls to thank because without them, I may have never discovered my love of writing! Let alone getting published! Ha ha!

Jan 12, 2018
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I love it!
by: HorseGirl

Is it really over? It is so sad. You should continue it. I love it though!

Jan 11, 2018
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loved it
by: Anonymous

I loved this and you're a great writer. It was so sad but so good. Keep up the good work!

Jan 08, 2018
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Hoofbeats
by: Violent Bruststroke

First off, I'd like to thank you for commenting on my book. It means a lot.

Yes, I'm totally fine with you using the title. It's not like I'm ever gonna get published :/

I still can't believe you're getting published!

Jan 05, 2018
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Great story!
by: Hoofbeats

Nice plot and a piece of good writing.

I wanted to ask you a question...
Would you let me use the title 'Broken Soul' for one of my books that I may get published?

It's fine if it's a 'no' but it would stand as a great title for the plot of my book.

Thanking you,
Hoofbeats

Jan 05, 2018
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Cool book!
by: Hoofbeats

Great story!

Jan 05, 2018
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Thank you!
by: Violent Brushstroke

Thank you for the comment. Yeah, I know it is a little short, but I just felt like doing a really sad story but I didn't want to have to write an entire book. So I did a short story!

I'm writing a different book right now so that's taking all my imagination. ;p

Dec 27, 2017
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So Good
by: Horses Rock This World

You're such a talented writer. That was such a sad story. How can a girl, her boyfriend and her horse die within 2 weeks?

A bit short though.

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