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Jun 02, 2011
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Awesome
by: Anonymous

This is really good!!

May 29, 2011
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WOW
by: Anonymous

I love it, there's something you need to use now
when she is talking about the 10 horses she says something like...
"She is the only thing her mom has...." that is something you can include in the story! Maybe, a sister, brother or even dad died? Great story! PART 22222222222222222222

May 26, 2011
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WOW!
by: Destiny - Horse - lovers page

You're a great writer!!! Please keep writing, and check out my page (READ and PLEASE comment! (i don't have a title yet)

Your doing great!

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