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Oct 16, 2014
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Part 5? Also great story!
by: ChaseYourDreams

This story is awesome and I love Moonstones Pride also. Just wondering when part 5 is coming out? You have been keeping me in suspense!

Jun 25, 2013
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Please Write More
by: JJ

This is awesome! I am absolutely thrilled just waiting for the next part!

Dec 01, 2012
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Please write more!
by: Serenity

Please I am so interested in this story!!

Nov 25, 2012
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More!!!!
by: Anonymous

OMG! I love it so good plz write more! your a fantastic writer. I wish I could write like you.

Sep 26, 2012
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plz write morre
by: Anonymous

plz this story is really good! plz write more to this story.

Sep 23, 2012
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AHHH-MAZ-ING
by: Alessia

This is so good! I love it! Oh how dare the ex come and live next to her! So much drama, love it! Please write more! MORE MORE MORE!

Jul 02, 2012
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Thanks!
by: Kelsei

Thanks guys! I tried to post another chapter, but I guess it didn't go through..

Jun 26, 2012
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excellent!
by: SaphireRain

I noticed you didn't have any comments and I just want to say, even though you don't have much comments, PLEASE DON'T STOP!!! I absolutely love this story!!! Please continue!

Jun 20, 2012
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Hi Kelsei
by: Unicorn

Oooooh, and the plot grows thicker! Excellent! The introduction of Tyler and the race has definitely amped this story up a bit. The section in the tack shop felt a little flat and emotionless (from "Ten minutes later..." to "I grab a black one and an English bridle...") It's a very short section, but somehow it just didn't work. I am, however, the queen of writing aimless scenes (not just a paragraph like you did, but whole chapters of the stuff) so you are welcome to howl at me that I am a hypocrite and hit me over the head with a manuscript if you like.

Well written, Kelsei. I simply can't wait to see what happens next! (Part 3 was well done, too, sorry I didn't comment there). Thanks for sharing.

Unicorn

Jun 19, 2012
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:)
by: :)

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Jun 18, 2012
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keep writing forever
by: ali

i love to sit and read your stories. your stories are better than our flat screen tv. I love to write should i write too? you are awesome, have you written any other stories other than moonstomes pride or is that your first story?

Jun 18, 2012
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great
by: englishridingcwgrl

Hey! You get a little off topic on this one, but that is ok, I llloooovvvveeee it, it's going great. Keep it up!

Jun 18, 2012
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Love it!!!!
by: Anonymous

OMG!!!! Plz post more!!!!! I love it!!!!! Hey, could u put the links on the other parts? I need to read them again - they were sooooooo good!!!!!!!

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