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Feb 02, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		nice
by: Aysha

this story is great but just like anonymous said it needs more detail and it needs to be longer. can't wait for part 2.
Jan 30, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		best story ever!
by: Aysha

hey shine this is the best story ever i have ever read in my life. I want part 2!
Jan 07, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		love it
by: delilah

I luv your story. u r so cool
Dec 31, 2010
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starstarstarstarstar 		exquisite
by: Izzy

This story is exquisite! I love it! Please, write part two!
Dec 31, 2010
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starstarstarstarstar 		PART 2
by: Anonymous

WE ALL NEED PART 2!
Dec 31, 2010
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starstarstarstarstar 		Part 2
by: Anonymous

Ditto Lex! There are two problems with this story:

a) it would be lovely if you could describe the horses, just what color they are, what breed, etc. - just my personal preference and,

b) it's too short!! Write more!!
Dec 30, 2010
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starstarstarstarstar 		Apollo
by: ranchgirl

I want part 2
Dec 30, 2010
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starstarstarstarstar 		:D
by: Lex

PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2
Jan 02, 2011
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starstarstarstar 		Edit it, but part 2!
by: Anonymous

Liked the story line, just needs more detail!
Part 2 please!!!

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