I love the start to the story it is really good. i am not writing a story my self but i love reading all kinds of horse stories. keep up the good work! :)
Mar 05, 2012 Rating
WOW by: Anonymous
That was AWESOME!!!!!!! my story is my archie part 1 YOU have a GREAT writing talent!
Mar 03, 2012 Rating
I like it! by: Josey
Wow. Great story. Very nice. :) Check out my story 'The Story of the Appaloosa' and get some ideas, names, etc. :)
~Josey/Emilie <3
Mar 03, 2012 Rating
Hi by: lucinda
this is a great idea for the start of the story. I write quite a few stories on here and my newest on is the girl and the horse here's the URL https://www.horsecrazygirls.com/the-girl-and-the-horse-part-4.html
part 4 is my latest part :)
hope this helps with your writing strategies
GREAT STORY SO FAR!
Mar 02, 2012 Rating
Awesome!! by: Anonymous
I think it's great, please post the rest soon.
Mar 02, 2012 Rating
GREAT STORY!! by: Katie
you did a VERY good job on this story!! I was like awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! when it ended :) This story has a lot of promise, and you have great writing talent, and ability. PLEASE, part 2!!!!!!
Mar 02, 2012 Rating
Don't worry! by: Gk99
Hey there! This story sounds great so far:) especially since it's a partly true story! Please write more!!
