Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 1


(New York, USA)

This is a story I wrote myself, enjoy!!!

Julia couldn't take her eyes off of the the new horse. Her powerful muscles rippling under her beautiful red roan coat. As she watched, the horse ran around, sometimes stopping to neigh at the other, plain colored, horses.

"Can I ride Star today?" Julia asked Sarah, the owner of her riding barn, "I really think she will be good for me. Hanna said her ride is great!!"

"Not until you get a little better, she's a very advanced horse, she is a little too fast for you. Don't worry, you'll get there," Sarah said sympathetically.

Felling her face grow hot and her eyes grow wet, Julia mumbled, "Okay," and walked to the barn to saddle up Texas, a great but not very pretty horse.

Comments for Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 1

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Feb 29, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Thanks!!
by: Tiger

Thanks guys!!! go to Where the Red Roans Run Free continued to find out a little more!! Glad you guys like it!!

Feb 28, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
GREAT STORY!!
by: Katie

this is a AWESOME story!! it has a very good plot, so you can do anything with it, and it is very well written!! GREAT JOB!!!

Feb 28, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Great:)
by: Gk99

Great story! Please continue:)

Feb 28, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstar
:)
by: lucinda

great but can the next part be longer? i hate it when i'm on the edge of my seat and people don't post very fast because i read quickly.

Click here to add your own comments

Return to Horse Training Stories.

Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 2

by Tiger
(New York, USA)

Sorry I could not finish, here is the rest:

After tacking up and ridding, Julia wanted to ride Star more than anything. One night, two days after she saw Star for the first time, she just couldn't stand it anymore, she had to ride that horse. Only one problem, she had no experience in running away and the barn was 20 minutes from her house in a car.

"I'll have to walk," she thought grimly, looking outside at the pouring rain. Grabbing her rain coat and boats, Julia ran down the stairs to the door.

Once outside, she shivered with fear and with the cold, it was PITCH BLACK, and got darker as she moved away from the comforting lights of home. I HAVE to ride that horse, Julia thought to herself as she ran through the freezing rain, I just HAVE to.

She knew the way the the barn by heart, so she didn't get lost, and by the time she got there, it had only been 30 minutes, and she was not even cold anymore from all of that running.

The stable door made a creak, much to loud for comfort, and opened to a dim lighted hallway full of Julia's favorite animals, HORSES!!! The tack was easy to find, and the sable felt warm in Julia's hands, as if someone had used it just recently.

Suddenly someone grabbed Julia by the shirt and whispered, "We don't like trespassers in this here barn, sweetie, what are you a doing down here at this late hour? Not fixing to steal a horse I hope."

To find out what happens, go to "Where the Red Roans Run Free Part 3" for the rest. Hope you like it!!!

Comments for Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 2

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Mar 04, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Thanks!!!
by: Tiger

Thanks guys!! It is always great for a writer to hear that someone likes her story!!!

Feb 29, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
oh my goodness!!
by: Katie

WOW this is GREAT!!! I love the plot, and the ending was AMAZING!!!!!!! If there is a part 3, I am going to read it right now :) that is a FANTASIC story!

Feb 29, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Oo!
by: Gk99

I love how you make each part of the story a "cliffhanger" :) Very well done with the mysterious twist at the end!:) keep up the great work!!

Click here to add your own comments

Return to Horse Training Stories.

Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 3

by Tiger
(New York, USA)

Sorry to keep you guys waiting, here is the real end, maybe!!

Julia kicked and punched, but was hit in the head by something hard and was knocked out before she could hit someone. Darkness enveloped Julia, making the people's voices blurry. All she could her before she drifted off to unconsciousness was "lets take her to the police."

A bright sun light woke Julia up the next morning, though she was not in her bed like she thought she would be. Instead, she was in a cold prison cell with a small, hard bed and one little window across from the bed just big enough to let in the sun.

Covering her angry face with a gross dusty blanket, she cried herself to sleep. She had no idea that the next time she got up she would be in the last place she would have expected.

Go to Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 4 for the REAL rest, sorry guys, think of it as waiting for a book in a series to come out!!!

Comments for Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 3

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Mar 07, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
U guys rock!!!!
by: Tiger

You guys make my day!!!!! I love coming home from school and checking my email and seeing the comments!!! Part for noting the way!!!

Mar 02, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
AWWW poor girl :)
by: Katie

GREAT story! Very well written!! you have some talent! CANNOT WAIT FOR PART 4! :)

Mar 02, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
ooooo!
by: Gk99

Awesome job, Tiger! This is getting more mysterious by the minute! Great job on transitioning too by the way:)

Click here to add your own comments

Return to Horse Training Stories.

Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 4

by Tiger
(NY, USA)

Sorry to keep you all waiting!! Here is the real end!! Enjoy!!!!

Cold grass and the sound of horses woke Julia from her deep sleep. She blinked her eyes open and looked around. Grass, more grass, trees and...HORSES!!! Julia was so startled she yelled, making the horses raise their heads from their grazing. Studying the horses, Julia noticed that
they were all horses from her old barn, and soon she spotted Star, grazing by a chestnut named Thumper.

"How did we get here, Starry Star Girl?," Julia asked, weaving her way through the other horses to Star. "Where are we??"

Star, seeming to know what Julia was saying, shook her head. Julia knew what she had to do, she had to get on Star and ride to safety, than tell someone about the horses. But as she looked around, she felt the happiest she had ever felt.

The fresh air, the open spaces and no adults!!! Besides, her parents would kill her if she went back, so why not become a bush girl. She had read about them in stories and had always secretly dreamed about being one.

Just than there was a loud neigh and the sound of horses running. Whats going on? Julia thought as she ran after the horses. After going over a small hill, she saw why all of the horses ran to this spot.

A huge field full of even greener(if that's possible) grass than the grass on the other side and grazing it where not only the horses from Julia's barn, but at lest 20 red roan horses. Off to Julia's right about 20 feet away was a cave that looked big enough to live in comfortably.

"I could stay here forever," Julia cried to the wind, and with that she bounded to the cave, suddenly feeling very hungry, and made a fire, "There's a stream over there, it's a good thing I like fish."

Comments for Where the Red Roans Run Free - Part 4

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Feb 18, 2013
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Really Interesting
by: Maria

Hi:

Really Interesting. Could you please keep writing this story. I would love a chapter 5 and more.

Thanks.

May 30, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
very good story
by: holly

i have read part 1,2,3 and 4 and it is a really good story. i love it so much that i want to read it all day.

Mar 17, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Thanks!!!
by: Tiger

I was going to end it, but if you guys really like it I PROMISE I will make a part 5!!!! Thanks!!!!

Mar 16, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
GREAT STORY!!
by: Katie

is... sniff... this the end? :) if it is, then it is a VERY good ending, and if not, then I look forward to part 5!!!!!! :) you have talent, please keep writing!

Mar 16, 2012
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
:)
by: Gk99

Ooh!! Great suspense arises.....

Click here to add your own comments

Return to Horse Training Stories.