You Told Me You Loved Me - Part 1

by Sarah (horseluver4evernever)
(Canada)

The First Jump

The First Jump

Forever. That's what you said. You told me that you would protect me. That you loved me. You lied. I protected you. I could've hurt you or even killed you with one wrong move. But I didn't. I was vulnerable. I believed that loved me and that you would keep me forever. I was wrong.

May 15th 2013
I trotted gracefully into the ring. Katie sat proudly on my back. I felt her apply pressure to my sides, so I picked up a working canter. We cantered around the ring once, and then the buzzer went. I cantered over to a big jump. This course was 4' with all types of jumps. I was a grey Dutch warmblood gelding that stood 17.3hh. I competed in national competitions showing in jumpers of all height. My rider, Katie, was 16 years old. She was the kindest girl I could think of. At least, that's what I thought.

We approached the first jump. La Tee Da... I thought to myself as we got closer. We soared through the air..... And we were over it! I came to the second jump, a big oxer. We cleared that too. The third, forth and fifth were simple. When it came to the second to last jump, I felt something in my fetlock. As I was about to take off, my fetlock buckled. I fell to my knees and rolled over. Katie was thrown in to the wall. I lay on the ground motionlessly. The doctors and nurses rushed out to the ring to retrieve Katie. They checked her over.

I heard them say that she broke her arm and may have a mild concussion. I felt so horrible p, even though there was nothing I could do to stop what had happened. I did not think that this little incident would cause the horrible things that happened in my future.

Please comment for part 2. I would really appreciate it if you guys can give me feedback. No hate plz! It's not great but I wanted to write a story...

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May 28, 2016
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I Love It!
by: Jesus&HorseLover4-ever

Write more! PLEASE! It is so good! You are a talented writer!

Oct 09, 2014
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Sep 27, 2014
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Dec 30, 2013
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Oct 27, 2013
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great
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Oct 27, 2013
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Oct 27, 2013
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thanks!
by: horseluver4evernever (author)

Thanks! I will definitely continue this story! I don't know when part2 will be up. But in the next week or so!:)

Oct 27, 2013
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by: Sadee

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